I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Wednesday, 18 December 2019
Activity 3: Miracle on the Hudson
LI: to make a recount about what you did.
This week for SLJ, we had to make recount bout what you did. We had to create a google document and then we ahd think about what we did. My recount was about going to the lagoon pools with my school.
Hi Elaario, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the narrative you shared about being brave... sometimes being brave can be fun too, I'm glad you enjoyed the courage you showed! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Hello Elario, I really enjoyed reading your blog post and observing your work that you have completed. I like how you wrote it like a narrative hook. Did you find anything hard about this activity?
Hi Elaario! This DLO you created was great. Remember to re read your DLOs before you publish them as it might not make sense. Blog you later ~ Florence
Hi Elaario, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the narrative you shared about being brave... sometimes being brave can be fun too, I'm glad you enjoyed the courage you showed! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHello Elario,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post and observing your work that you have completed. I like how you wrote it like a narrative hook. Did you find anything hard about this activity?
Great blogging and Keep it up!
Hi Elaario!
ReplyDeleteThis DLO you created was great. Remember to re read your DLOs before you publish them as it might not make sense.
Blog you later
~ Florence